Tuesday 4 September 2018

The Special Tree

The Special Tree

Curling over in lashing winds
Protecting humans
Against the never ending harsh weather

Standing tall, Rocking side to side
Holding precious children inside
While listening to tieke chirping in sunshine

Waving around like a octopus in thunder
Sprinkling its angry flowers all over wet covered ground
The wind swishing the seeds around wet grass
Making them cry for their mum

Laughing away in soft breezes
While listening to people tell stories
In their kiwi summer clothes

Children gathering on the roots on christmas night
While grandparents share their traditional stories
During clear or rain

Children star gazing and slowly drifting off to sleep
Thinking about the pohutukawa tree

Children think about how thick roots stick up
Leading their way towards the big brown trunk
Branches guide its path
Towards red spiky flowers sitting in the tree
While stunning green leaves surround the special Pohutukawa tree

By Caitlyn Hamilton

1 comment:

  1. Hi Caitlyn
    Hi My name is Avalon and l am from Panmure bridge school. l like the way you have wrote this it gives me a clear pitcher in my mind of what the special tree looks like. l think you could have added a blurb to talk more about what this was about.
    Great work and keep it up

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